Really fantastic game! The art and animations are extremely well done. I won't talk about the issues with the controls since everyone else did, but I will say they weren't a dealbreaker for me, as I got used to them around the 3rd level. Also the way the story and everything tied into the gameplay and atmosphere was really well done. I thought the music was very fitting and I loved the dialog between the two characters while you're platforming around.
If I had to point out a couple issues that bothered me, I think for a narrative game dying was a little too punishing. I think putting the player back at the beginning of the level is fine since they aren't that big, but making you recollect all the fruit is pretty rough. I also wish there was a way to skip through the scripted dialog where you can't move, especially after you've read it the firs time. It took me 3 times to beat the race level without dying, and having to sit through the dialog each time was pretty annoying.
Overall though, this is super polished, fun, and narratively satisfying. Great job!