It seems that Bitsy is the wrong tool for this particular experiment- the dialogue box is simply too small for your long, meandering sentences. Normally I love whimsical writing like this, but I had a hard time following sentences that were three or four dialogue boxes long. I'm afraid I didn't really catch what this is about. Every sentence seemed to trail off into completely random ideas.
Was there a connection I missed? Would you care to post a transcript of the dialogue? I think that would help a lot.