Congrats on your first game! It's a really cool submission, especially for a first one! The story kinda creeped me out (in a good way, since it was the point of the story). I agreed with yousayrandy when it comes to Chloe, you wrote her(?) really well, just unhinged enough to make you feel anxiety while you play, but not over the board.
But while the text UI was very fitting and seemed to work with the setting, I didn't feel right that no one tried to scroll a bit up to check that something was weird, even if you check in and out of a convo. That made the other flatmates super one-dimensional and maybe not needed? Maybe only having one roommate (Meghan) being a bit more fleshed out would have helped?
Overall: was an entertaining play. Thank you for creating it!