I am so glad people are loving Clash as much as I do. xD He's my favorite OC these days, and I definitely need to do more with him. I mean, he's been in a few other games, sure, but I need MORE. Like I mentioned earlier, I am still learning how to do foreshadowing in a way that isn't jarring. :-(
And I did not mention this earlier, but I will say that the first-person twist is a reference to Agatha Christie's The Murder Of Roger Ackroyd. Or to be more specific, my reaction to that book's ending when I read it in 11th grade. I remember almost throwing the book down the hallway in both anger and awe. So I wanted to see if I could pull that kind of twist off, too. :-)
But yes, thank you so much for the kind words! I had so much trouble getting this story out, so I'm glad people are enjoying it.