Pros
- Very well written plot and characters! The plot was very engaging from start to finish and I loved the characters and their stories and personalities.
- Amazing visuals! I especially liked Wren and Thalia's designs.
- Great music! Very catchy and very fitting! Perfect choice of instruments!
- Perfect implementation of the magical realism theme. I loved Wren's ability to look into the past and how it is treated as something really common.
Cons
- Not really a con, but I'd wish the game was longer! Things were getting really interesting and I was rooting for Wren and Thalia to become an item and then the game ended haha.
Overall: short but amazing experience! Great visuals and music, and a fantastic storyline! This has a lot of potential, you definitely should keep working on it. Great work!