It feel like it is a bit too short to give a proper review. There is not much in terms of writing to go on and give an idea of what is happening, even after going through all of the possible options. I think you wanted to have 3 different partners but maybe ran out of time before you could implement it?
I had a feel of Hunger Games meets Squid Games type of feel? There is definitely potential in there, but you don't have a lot of choice in what you are doing (or how it impact the character/story). Some of the endings mention a Nick, but we are never introduced to them beforehand (which is fine, but the story ends there, so what's the point?).
I feel like there was a lot missing between each part. How is the MC feeling? Do they feel worry/dread or are they calm? What's their opinions/thoughts on what is happening (do they agree/disagree)?
Gotta give you some props for making your own background music. That was dope.
Other small things:
- Is it normal the director is named []? Why []?
- Let's what each other's back -> had to read that multiple times to see if I just read it wrong or not. There are some other typos here and there as well. But that was the thing that stuck the most.
- It was not really the best font to use. Made it a bit hard to read, which is not great when the whole thing of this game is just text...
Congrats on publishing your first game here!