Hey Marc, great first entry! It's clear that you polished this game very well and TBH I wouldn't be surprised to see something like this on a marketplace or as a mini game of bigger title. Art is great and cohesive, the color palette was well picked. Soundfx and music also perform very well with the rest of the game. One thing that bothered me a little bit was the parallax of the clouds, at times they would make hard to see the coins or the character, idk if this was the intention, to create this blind spots, but made me feel a little frustrated. Maybe the clouds could be beneath everything to give the idea of "above the clouds". Keep up with the great work, looking forward to seeing your next entry. Cheers!
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Thanks, ak1r4.
The clouds are intentional. In the beginning they should hardly bother you but they will get thicker and more numerous as the game progresses. However, it is something I’d still like to tweak a bit more.
Unfortunately I cannot review your game in return, since I don’t have a Windows. From what I see of the screenshots/gifs it looks awesome. Lemme know if you bring it to Mac or web.