Erm, this dude said absolutely nothing about your NTR content
But to be fair, if you cut out all your NTR content, you would have no content. NTR is a great element, that belongs in every story to some degree, like salt is a great additive to every meal. You however, rip the cap off the salt shaker and dump the whole goddamned thing all over the food. I think it worked incredibly well in Forsaken Paradise, the story set the stage for that perfectly, but Pandora's Box is just downright fucking depressing.