I'm intrigued by how many of these jam submissions deal with some kind of unrequited (or unspoken) feelings — tangled friendships and their endings are one thing, but romance seems to be in the air! Maybe because it's February.
Anyway, seconding all of this. The dialogue was authentic to any world or guild chat I've ever been in (my favorite part was the impulse to rush through one final raid), the ending was a swift knock on the head (with a ray of hope!), and the chatbox didn't seem that bad to me, either :)
Thanks for this little treat!