Thank you for taking the time to read my story. After looking over the hiccup you mentioned, I agree - it was really not clear. Rather than let it remain as it was, I went ahead and updated it. I uploaded a post-Jam revision to clarify that specific paragraph. Given the time put into this story, I'd hate to not improve that section to benefit the overall story. I'll leave both versions posted with an explanation so individuals can read the "Jam" version or the "revised" version.
Thanks again for taking the time to read!
