Wow. If there are references here, I didn't get them. That being said, this was pretty trippy and hilarious. Fun times!
Just wanted to add in that I loved the poetry. The fly-off at the end was also great. Big fan of this experimental work.
Thank you so much! Yeah, experimental is the right word. The flying exists because I embraced a mistake and made it work.
No specific references to get. Knowing about Electric Football helps. I borrowed from The Odyssey, but we all do that.