So this was an excellent and evocative piece about which I can say very little in criticism. The only thing that I might say, and this is more of a personal preference, is that I would have liked to imagine and explore how the Battle Brothers of the Sirius sector might differ from the faction that originally inspired them. While this piece used the ideas and concepts of that inspiration very well, I would be more interested in a new or different interpretation of the faction for a new and different setting. But, again, that's a personal preference and might not fit with how you see the Sirius sector setting and the OPR project.