This was a very snappy, well-written action piece. Some of the lines drew a laugh from me ("right up his underhive!" was amazing) and the characterization of our protagonist was spot-on. It was also a clever take on the 'reflection' theme. If I had a complaint, it would be that the two factions' characterizations are played very straight (well, we're only seeing the Brutes through Fraya's eyes) and throwing in some personal element to set Fraya at least apart as an individual would have been nice.