One of the first things that drew me in was your logo/header, and it continued to impress me as I played the game! It has me inspired for the next game jam! The music fit nicely with the theme, and set the tone throughout.
I will admit, the amount of text was a bit for me to overcome as someone who struggles to consume large amount of text at a time. It may have helped a little if the narrator/other characters had different color fonts to seperate it a bit?
Either way, I loved the "Choose your own adventure" aspect, and being able to play it multiple times, and not getting the same game twice! The fighting mechanics as well was awesome!