Honestly, I didn't even notice the lack of possessiveness in the last version. Probably because the certain plot point where it is shown best wasn't added? Hard to say.
(The job orders work fine for me).
A typo? If you go with Rex to the bar, the eldred woman he is dating is referred to as "the cuverian that flirted with him earlier in the mess hall".
The new body type looks nice and hot. Won't use it myself (I'm all for short and thin type representation in games), but variety is always good!