I found this story conflicting. I loved reading each entry individually, and the entries were quite compelling; however, when put together as a whole, I felt they became convoluted by the "timestamps." They were more distracting than immersive without some form of reference to what they meant.
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Thanks! The timestamps don't have any reference at all other than to themselves. I was only using them to try and tie the first and last passage together and the rest of the story is a fairly linear timeline. Travel thru space 'memberin' -> Oh no spaceship attack everybody escapepods! -> crash and we better defend ourselves ->good thing we defended ourselves oh no cap! -> I'mma get them bots is every passage inbetween the first and last. But absolutely confusing, there has to be a better way!