The music and graphics were really good and I loved the concept! Three things I might suggest: 1. Add a checkpoint system in the sewers, it was kind of a drag to end up all the way at the beginning when I had made it pretty far. 2. The jump system could be a bit more refined. I think maybe if you had wall jumping that might help, since I ended up needing to use the walls with the double jump to get where I needed to go. 3. I would break up the dialogue screens from one screen to a couple. I loved what you wrote, but it was kind of a lot to have it all up at once. I also loved your response options, super fun. Overall some fun stuff for sure!