Now this is what I call good wholesome smut. The whole thing is actually pretty romantic. Drek really comes across as a big ol' teddy bear, monstrous inhuman skull-face notwithstanding. The realistic backgrounds do clash a little with the hand-drawn characters, even with the filters, but that's not uncommon with visual novels. The character art is pretty good - if you want to work on this a little more after the jam is over, I'd love to see some hand-drawn backgrounds.
Good choice of music, too! Patricia Taxxon's stuff really fits weird modern reality settings like this one.