I liked the mechanic of the little menu to move or place things. It also had a good tutorial on how to use it so you never really feel confused about what to do. Good music and tile art plus I like the different hair colours you gave the characters. The hair colours make the characters feel unique for the story and maybe if you continue with future versions you could attach them to different mechanics and skill sets so each character is even more unique.
Unfortunately I did have a few problems with the game. Sometimes text would get stuck displaying on my mouse. There was also a visual bug that happened once per run through don't know if it happened in the same spot or not. The biggest problem I had was that I crashed when I met Lizzy the first time. So I replayed through and approached her at a different angle to see if I would still crash and I didn't. So I got a bit further but when I was trying to find where to go I backtracked through Lizzy's room and crashed again so I think there is a problem somewhere in the bottom right of Lizzy's room. So unfortunately I didn't get to see the rest of the game but I did copy the first error for you. I forgot for the second one though. I played with the windows binary version.
If you end up fixing the crash at some point let me know and I'll play your game again. I liked what I played :)