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The English usage in this game is not very good, many punctuations, sentence structure, and grammar mistakes were made. Honestly, this does kill the vibe a little. The audio is perfectly timed and the text animations are adding towards the situations the protagonist finds themself in. The art within the game is there, it looks neat. I have played a few games since this game has high replayability. The story itself is a little incoherent, but it's still enjoyable!

Full review on my website!

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I would love to rate the game higher, for it's great, but please fix the English! <3

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Thank you for the review :)

I understand that the story seems a little weird because there were some random mandatory thematics in the gamejam, so it ended up like that.

Oh, I see, which jam was it for? :D

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It was a university project/gamejam (closed gamejam for our class) to learn twine :)

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Really cool! Good luck with future projects!