This is an incredible piece of writing, but I have to ask, are you still working on this? As Avinni said, it's been a year now... if you need any help with the writing, I'd gladly help, but just Please don't have abandoned this.
According to the author's tumblr, they're taking a break from LaF since they're not happy with the story in it's current form and need a break from it. It's not abandoned, they just aren't going to touch it for a bit.
https://salty-stories.tumblr.com/post/666763385928613888/im-curious-why-you-say-... The post in question, if you want to read.