Alright, I think... I get it? We basically want to capstone the night less with a sudden fade to black but more a light reassurance from Dave's perspective that he has something to take shelter in despite all the bad things going on?
It is the ending of an arc more or less, so it should be more than just a sudden fade to black. So fluffing it up should help, changing framing would help with adding fluff and would help keep away from blatant smut to keep your more PG rating.
