This game is good, if it is the start for the developer. The layout and speed of the game needs improving. No possible way to speed up text, this makes for a slow read and hard to complete. Further more, the story is written to the MC who acts like they also have never been to the time/world they are in. This feeling comes from having to explain to the MC who the police are in their home town.
But for a first or second attempt, good job. Good luck with future.