This was very pleasant to listen to -- I like how your story idea connects to the theme and I think you captured the emotional journey well! I also think it fits with your intended target of visual novel-type gameplay -- some tracks ("It's A Girl," "Hindsight") seem like they are meant to highlight particular story moments while the others ("Growing Pains," "It's A Life For Me") could be used to underscore the emotions of e.g. a dialogue scene. And it was cute hearing how some parts of the first track were echoed in the final one to bring everything full circle. Nice work!