I just rated it and posted some thoughts. I didn't see any obvious glitches at all and the loading screen did seem to work perfectly. Does the loading screen serve a functional purpose or is it simply intended to transition the player from one screen to another?
I think Parsons will be great for pushing your thinking outside the box to make truly original content. That's really what I'd love to see in your work.
If you ever have a chance to take a class with Ernesto Klar, I highly recommend doing so. It looks like he's currently teaching BFA DT Thesis 1 with Kyle Li. Who are your instructors for those classes?