I liked it a lot. If ZUN made Shoot the bullet easier it be this, though I did try to get points by putting myself into the picture.
I did encounter Cornelia intruding on Ophelia's date though. Not exactly out of character, but I don't think that was intended.
Overall this is a great entry.
Also getting silky smooth is quite difficult. I find that on some patterns the amount varies greatly. Like sometime it's enough if half a pixel is in the shot, and at other times you need the whole leg. Might be just me though.