Hi!
My eyes kind of hurt after playing for a while. Seems like a nice story, but reading white on white in combination with the noise filter really messed with me. Very nice graphics otherwise!
The music changes very often, so it would have been nice with some kind of fading between the different songs, and the music didn't loop quite seamlessly.
Very original style, please let me know if you make it less noisy and more readable and I'll give it another shot!