The game shows potential to tell a good story, but the rest of the game should be also polished as well:
- The visual aspect, although it is well crafted, can make your eyesight tired very fast. The noise is a nice resource, but less is more, and reducing it would be benefitial.
- I feel like some parts of the scenery could be improved by giving them darker backgrounds. For example, the introduction where you are home.
- The main character can feel a bit out of place. The rest of the game seems to be carefully drawn and crafter, but the protagonist feels like it was made for other kind of art style
- The collisions could be improved. I remember the beginning when you have to take the car, that I didn't know how to enter because I thought I was not able to access the doors.
Keep at it, these are some minor mistakes but the game has some potential to it! 😀😀