Oh god ok,listen Raus and everyone im saying this in advance i love this VN.Just putting that out there cause unfortunately i did not vibe with this update.
Firstly,congratulations on finishing the first route of the game! It was a long journey to get here and its awesome you made it this far! Also i hope you and your family and loved ones will stay safe i can't imagine the stress youre under.
.......So time to get into it.All in all i have like only two gripes with this update and they are as follows:
1. Burrys thoughts about how he is stronger than Luke and how there is no one to stop him and that Luke would be powerless and helpless to oppose Burry.Yeah i guess this may be me projecting my own tastes but idk Burry practically saying "I could rape Luke and nobody can stop me" while in the middle of having sex made me feel super uneasy and left me looking at burry in a less favourable light.Again its your story,you have the final say but I just feel like we could have gone without that and it sadly soured the experience of that scene for me.
2. I understand that not everything will be answered here but having the epilogue be a bullet point list is very underwhelming,I felt like so much was skimmed over.I get that its probably because more is to come so this wont be the final end but still as is right now it feels incomplete.
Im really sorry i was so negative in this one,but I cannot stress this enough I still love this VN and im sure the rest will be great.Hope you stay safe and have a good day Raus,bye.