I really liked the concept of the story, the artwork was very good, but there is a problem in your code. I did not search the boat but asked Fenya if she found anything, got the good cartridge and loaded the gun. If I unload the gun, I am given the option to load the damaged cartridge(but I never searched the boat to get it). Also, disabling the load and save function was a bit of an annoyance till I fixed it.