A nice visual novel! I play them from time to time, and this is a good example of a short, well executed little story. The slowly more depressing days, and the almost supernatural happenings of things going more and more wrong, until the last day where literally everything possible goes wrong. I liked that you followed up on the line where you described what a long journey walking would be, that sort of minor payoff is really nice.
The dialogue is over the top in it’s eloquence, which to me gave the game’s world a bit of absurdity which I enjoyed, but others might find jarring and distracting. Also right clicking reset the scene for me, which was a little frustrating!
It has a lot of writing for such a short period, I’m impressed, although I admit I’m a little unsatisfied being left with so many questions! Great job :)