The repetition of certain phrases was a stylistic decision to better emphasize the kind of fever dream state of the thing. And your children's book comment is actually a complement in my eyes. I was attempting to create a feeling like you're a kid who woke up in the middle of the night with a fever dream and turned on the TV or opened a book and saw something absurd. Something that they aren't sure is weird because of their fever dream state or is genuinely actually weird. Or both. Thanks for playing and giving this criticism though it helps out a lot.