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The repetition of certain phrases was a stylistic decision to better emphasize the kind of fever dream state of the thing. And your children's book comment is actually a complement in my eyes. I was attempting to create a feeling like you're a kid who woke up in the middle of the night with a fever dream and turned on the TV or opened a book and saw something absurd. Something that they aren't sure is weird because of their fever dream state or is genuinely actually weird. Or both. Thanks for playing and giving this criticism though it helps out a lot. 

Thanks for playing, I'm glad you enjoyed it for the most part, I pretty much wrote the game like it was a text based adventure game. The next one will definitely have a lot more gameplay and surreal imagery to look at. Hopefully it turns out the way I want it to.

Thanks for playing it I'm glad you enjoyed it. Is there anything specific about the writing you think I should improve, I'm already going more into the characterization of certain characters for the sequel, but it would be very helpful to know what needs to be improved so I can make it as good as I can.