Hi! :)
I'm a fellow NaNoRenO developer and I'm running around playing/reviewing games.
What I really liked in this one:
* The writing was fun and kept me entertained!
* The characters and art has so much personality, I couldn't wait to find out what the next character would look like, for example. :)
* Overall it feels like you had a clear concept in mind and executed it well!
What I feel could be improved:
* I didn't like the music that much, I feel like it didn't fit the vibe that well and also the instruments and mixing were a bit off here and there (I'm an audio guy so I probably think more about those things than most people do though).
* The interface could be improved, like I'd appreciate it if there was some kind of highlight when selecting things for example.
* The choices/menus seem a bit buggy, I couldn't return to the Main Menu at all, and it's a bit strange that I have to click one extra time after making a choice.
Overall, great work, and thanks for letting us play. :)
Dropping you a 5/5! <3
/Tymedust