Dude :l duude :o DUUUDE! xO jeeze, this VN! "^^_ Haha, it's really the best~! :D I just finished reading through the last 4our chapters and, oh gosh, xou really throw us through emotions, ne? :P 1ne minute I'm laughing, the next I'm crying, and eventually I'm blushing as my heart swells UwU I've said it before and I'll say it again, xou're a reeeaaallly good writer! >_</ thank xou sooo much for sharing this amazing story with us! And as much as I don't want the story to finish, I'm so excited to see how it ends! n_n
1ne thing I want to suggest though, I'd really like xou to use xour sprites more. I understand the tale is meant to be seen through Lucas's eyes, so I get it when xou don't show the sprites when characters are walking and such, but when they are sitting down, or even when Lucas is in bed with George, I really think xou should display sprites. Xou've put so much work into them that I think they deserve to be shown as much as possible~ Also, I believe seeing thier emotions will really help solidify some of those heartwarming moments~
Keep up the amazing work! <3