I really like the direction this was going in, very much the Uncle who works for Nintendo, if you know that game. I was immediately hooked by the concept and you had the style down to a T. However, the story is only so much, because inevitably all your choices lead into the same end. I understand the police ending being one alternative, but for it to be every alternative feels a little rushed. I would love to see some expansion on the story, more variety in your choices, and more! Great job!