So, I like the ambience and general vibres I get from this. The grand chamber reverb FX on that bass gives it a nice metallic feel I'm digging a lot and I specially like the quick interval in 00:09-00-11.
I'm not reading the motif melody too clearly, that's my one note. (The second instrument muddles the sound a bit, maybe that's why.)
Thank you for your review, I'm glad you liked the ambience! Also, I definitely agree with what you said about the second instrument. The way I originally wrote it was how it is in the second half of the clip, with two guitars -- but then I felt like it was a bit unclear, like you said. So I removed the second guitar and just kept the bass as a solo. Then I realized it ended up being almost exactly 15 seconds, so I decided to just repeat the motif again with the second guitar part added back in, and still kept it under the 30 second limit for the jam. Looking back, maybe it would have been a bit stronger without that second half, but I think I have a habit of not throwing things out even if they're not working. 😅
