I'm interested in seeing where this goes. I really liked your french couplets, so I tried to make english versions of them:
An heir, heaven sentenced to perdition
The sword has become his chief ambition
Peckish fear and exile keep him wary
The southern minstrel seeks sanctuary
So strong and slender, the lord of the hunt
Pursued by phantoms that he must confront
Heir of the dragons, lover of the flame
Avoiding cold and blade should be his aim
Hey, we really like those translations!
Would you be ok if we use them? We might have to change one thing (replacing heaven with gods in Maelbjorn's couplet, it would stick more with the overall theme of the story), but most of it would stay that way!
You will be credited in the VN if you agree, obviously!
Oh wow, of course! I'd be honored!
For Maelbjorn's couplet, to keep each line with ten syllables, here are two possible alternatives:
If you want to talk more about this, I'm Kopten#9136 over on Discord. Let me know if there's anything else localization-wise you'd want a second opinion on, I love this sort of thing.
