I finished the latest version of the game last night and would like to give my opinion.
I really enjoyed the development of the plot, the fact that Yarin and Brymror made peace made my heart very happy. I was not expecting the R18 event with the kobold in the elevator and I must say it caused me pleasure. If I can make any suggestions, the days of the game should correspond with the number of dates with the various characters available. Besides, I know it might take some more work, but the clue, horror, and sex scenes in the game should all have illustrative drawings (just like the sex scene in Garreth's first date).
Lastly, I still say that the friendship between Yarin and Brymror is beautiful, I just hope that it does not become something sticky for both of us, that there are no other divergenses and that it all ends with something romantic. Great job, guys, keep it up!