This is a page-turner, and I am about to go throw money at your Patreon page. The biggest criticism I can give is that the visuals/audio are unfinished, but I appreciate a game that lets those take a backseat to story development, rather than vice-versa.
The thing I enjoy most so far, is the difficulty of the choices presented. They all seem to have serious consequences, and it makes me put thought into each one. I get the sense they'll actually influence the story. It also helps that the writing is both descriptive and expedient; I'm not skipping entire pages that bog down the story instead of helping it.
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Thank you for the positive feedback and your promise of support, both are greatly appreciated!
You raise some good points regarding the visuals, especially in the regular scenes I think there is a lot more in terms of quality that I could wrench out by making scenes/characters feel more dynamic, I think they can sometimes feel a bit too static now.
Audio is another entire dimension that I know could add a lot, but sadly in terms of balancing my resources/time, audio is just something that has sadly been pushed back, though I am considering production on at least a main-theme for the game, but that's all in a very early-idea stage.