Hello! So far I am intrigued with the concept of the game, and I am looking forward to its continuation. That said, there are several typos and grammatical errors which may detract from the overall experience...
hello! So glad you are looking forward to the update! As for the errors I catch them when I get the chance as I am a full time college student as well as having a part time job and this is a WIP so it’s going to happen. But last I checked there weren’t to many typos or grammatical errors that I hadn’t caught. Let alone enough to ruin the experience. Hope you continue to enjoy the game though. And once it’s completed the errors will all be taken care of.
Good luck with the schooling and the part-time job!
I didn't say anything about ruining the experience. It really is quite good! I just meant that some sentences do seem a bit jarring because of the way they are constructed which can affect the (flow? idk if "flow is the right word?) of the narrative...
I am indeed going to follow this game through!