I can say it’s a nice game after an hour of playing. It has a good pace and speed telling. There are so many characters… They look unique within the game. They may be hard to develop, but for now I don’t see any problems here.
That magic font looks cool, and I could see its translation on the History page. There are characters and events pages, but they were somehow hard to find. Could you add icons of these windows to the main story window? You know, heart and scroll/book icon.
You have to find some beta readers. The game has too many errors. They aren’t so critical, but numerous. Wrong letters in some words, too low-quality punctuation or its absence, and letters in upper and low cases (The main pretension is the word “I”. You should always write it like this “I”, but in 80% of cases it goes as “i”. There were these type problems with other words).