I really enjoyed reading the first chapter. I do have a question however; Is Marcus the only one romancable? The first chapter is just mainly interactions between Callum and Marcus(which I don't mind one bit since he's the one I'm going for) and there are definitely intimate moments with him. Other than that, I really enjoyed it. The VN is also really well made for a one man team, so props to you for that! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the amazing work!