Thank you so much for taking the time to comment!
This was our first jam of any kind and more than anything, this proved to us that we are translators, not devs.
We did not leave anything untranslated. The two scenes you mention are actually ones where we were really happy with our results, and we spent quite a while polishing them.
We have no idea why those parts did not end up in the game. After we overcame initial tech difficulties with getting the translation to run at all, we saw that the translation for some scenes still wouldn't load the next day, even though they're obviously all in the same file we uploaded.
How to fix this? No idea at all. We thought that fixing whatever stopped any translation from showing up would make all of it show up, but alas.
So if you or anyone else knows how to rectify this to make our hard work appear where it is supposed to, we'd be very grateful.