A very cute, chill experience. I caught myself wishing some parts were a little more condensed, but overall, I had fun with this. It was a lot longer than I expected, though, which I still think is only in part because of reading it out loud.
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Thank you for the feedback; it's appreciated!
I did recently put out an update that removes some of the extraneous descriptions, since other people also said some scenes felt too long, but maybe I didn't cut enough out. I might read through the script again, if I have the time, and do another update to pare the wordcount down even more, if people think it would be beneficial.