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Hi LoganDanielle94, is it okay to ask for advice for a few sentences, probably at most 5? I wrote a narration about a story and wanted it to read like the dialogues in Hollow Knight but I'm not a native English speaker.

As an exchange I can probably help you to make a quick demo of one of your small project made in Ren'py. Maybe a two-minute game that has your narrative. If you're interested, you can reply to this comment.

Edit: A week of developing the demo. Sorry that I didn't specify any ETA.
Edit (2): My game's narrative demo: Yggdrasil (Demo)

Hello,  I ran through the demo game. What specifically would you like feedback on?

Hey. thanks for checking the demo.  Maybe a help for the grammar, and personality of the characters to get the right 'feel' for the game. I've also sent you a Friend Request on Discord named: armanlonedev#8239 I hope that we can talk about it there.