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hi Zakaria. 

I made my first horror game, and I would like to see someone playing it on a video. It would feel awesome to me, and I will share the video with my friends. 


https://vladyslu.itch.io/fist-stories-luckys-night


Hi there Vlad, I know this took me long to get to your game but I honestly had a lot going on and still can't find enough free time.

First of all, congratulations at your first horror game! I must say that there has been some stuff that almost prevent me from finishing your game, some weird stuff really haha!


Here is my simple review with some suggestions, hoping to see you around on our YouTube channel, we do more of these videos and reviews for all sorts of games out there! We mainly focus on Indie Games for now in order to support them with what we can:

♦ Game Idea: I love horror games because I can have fun while screaming XD, no, really... Horror games are great when made in a good way, your game however follows that style of retro-ish with VHS vibes which is not my cup of tea! But very wanted style, so your game should have a lot of coverage.

♦ Gameplay: It is a bit hard to see as things are darker than they should be, although the gameplay is good and only had one thing that prevented me from progressing in  the game. I had no painting to have the code for the first key, had to check other streams of the YouTubers on your game page comments! You will see this in the gameplay video provided.

♦ Story: Very interesting story, there is a mystery behind the little girl and the ending is even better, hoping to see more episodes for this game in the future to finish the story and understand it more.

♦ Artwork: Like I mentioned in the Game Idea section, this style of art is not for me, but I can appreciate a good artwork when I see one. Well done!

♦ Audio: The audio design for the game is great, that thunder with lightning was a great jumpscare! Love the voicing of the little girl and her singing, honestly, the game felt for me that it started from the point we see the little girl standing there.

♦ Bugs & Constructive Criticism: Most of the criticism will be towards the over-usage of darkness in the game, there are cameras in the game but no use of them, which I will recommend changing the position of the girl after a certain progression in the game, this will make things more intense! (You will understand where when watching the video here).

♦ Things to Double Down on: Surely the story is something you should focus on, I mean: realizing that our main character is a robot is such a huge turn of events for the game! Best of Luck Vlad!