Very interesting game! I like the models and the pre-rendered backgrounds, both were done very well. There's not very much sound or ambience, that would add a lot to the atmosphere. I found a bug where, when I try to move to a new location or listen to dialogue, I had to press E multiple times before it would work. I think the concept has potential, but there's just not much gameplay. (Spoilers) There's not any real danger or consequences if you fail the test. I think it would be cool if you had to make it through a whole day of school, solving puzzles and tests in various subjects, all the while avoiding the soldier and other ominous figures. I'd like to see this concept expanded, it's got good potential!
Also, I can't really properly rate the most-improved category, as there seems to be no download for the previous version.