I wanted to say that I liked the game. It's nice for one of these erotic BE games to actually be, you know, a *game*. There's challenge in navigating the events and trying to get the requirements for particular scenarios and I'd often find myself poring over the timeline trying to figure out the correct sequence, or picking out where to explore next. Which was great.
Now onto the negative.
- The timeline should be visible from the end game screen and/or main menu. I can see even in your screenshots here in the comments that even you have had to start a new run, just to view the timeline... It's very annoying to want to see the timeline, so you start a new game, only to put the puzzle pieces together and realise you need to change someone's corruption levels... which means going through the entire run unless you use the debug END RUN button.
- Why are the girls so big man? I'm not the first to comment on this but every woman in this game has larger tits than I've ever seen on anyone in person. You could halve Alex's boobs and she'd still be very big by any realistic standards. I'm guessing that the answer is simply that you like big boobs and you cannot lie; and since this is your game, you're the boss. But if I were a part of your dev team I'd be barracking for more realistic sizes, while keeping the same relative size between each character. Food for thought.
As for suggestions:
- I loved any moment where I needed to backtrack on corruption. For instance you need to have Haily at level 0 in order to be taking photos. This meant that slamming go on each corruption level as you got it wasn't always the correct answer. I'd love to see more of that where perhaps some progression might require Level 1 of one girl and Level 2 of another while she's at level 0 and another is at level 3, for example.
- I understand the character of Lina and that she's extreme levels of introverted and thus doesn't talk, but it's really hard to connect with her like that. For instance after snooping on Alex in the bedroom, the main character has to literally guess why she's upset. Thankfully, we're only presented with three options but in reality there are a million ways to interpret her body language... I really hope that at higher corruption levels she will speak, even if it's only via text messages at first.
- Since we only ever get to experience one weekend, I was hoping that some of the text message rewards would help expand that. But each picture seems to come along with the barest of story and explanation.
- Lastly, I hope to see more fetish content included. Right now the BE stuff is pretty limited and besides that this is mostly just a dating sim right? I just feel that there's a lot of other games to play if that's all you wanted so I hope there's real transformation as the game progresses in the future. Maybe it doesn't need to be BE. Perhaps you could involve ass, height or weight gain. Perhaps the transformations could be less literal and maybe you would see people arrive at the cabin with even bigger changes to their history, like if somehow you've changed history to make it so that one of these women was a girlfriend of yours all along?
Really good stuff but there's a lot of potential here. I hope you can harness it all.