So to be clear, there's no continuation of the story here, just another path in the 'past'?
On another note; It's really odd to be a Laura-stan. I mean if I make all the choices I want then my story ended in the "big-dick" ending. Or it ended in the cruise ending. It's jarring to want to continue the story but also absolutely agree with Laura. Like, why are you mind-controlling me? I agree with all of this.
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Okay firstly; Tutorial. Put one in. Or at least a better one than you've got here. Nowhere does it explain that running out of ammo stuns you. Nor is there any indication that masturbating restores your max energy. I could go on there's so much more that needs explaining.
Secondly; there's so much waiting in this game. Why does your ammo return so slowly. I get that you want to make sure they can't just shoot infinitely but I've exited the room and reached safety, but I can't go back in to combat until I sit and wait for like 2-3 minutes doing nothing while my ammo regens... You've also got to wait for the chair to remove any pregnancies, you've got to wait for masturabation to restore your health. It takes too damn long!
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You mentioned that if we have contributed over $15 then we should contact you about getting access. Over the course of development I am sure that I've spent at least $10 on a donation and a month of Patreon. I may have spent more. Even if I have to send $5 I'd be interested in getting my past contributions recognised in this edition.
Save yourself some time, if you want something like this go to Ai.Dungeon, make a free account and give it some instructions to make a weight gain RPG for you.
It'll all be text, no 3d model involved, but the AI will respond much faster, make far more sense, offer so much more than swamp and mushrooms, and you can just tell it to retry when it generates nonsense.
The other thing I wanted to see from the game but there's not a lot of is to do with the premise of the game.
Somehow you're reliving this weekend over and over again but details from the past change between runs.
* The MC appears completely unaware of all of this and I'm not sold on this idea. On one hand, it completely avoids the Groundhog day cliche of "I'm stuck in a time loop" and that's good because I don't need our character running around convincing everyone that something is weird. But on the other hand it seems weird to not address it. We're playing as the MC. We make decisions as the MC. We as players can use our information of having replayed multiple times to make these decisions but when the MC arrives they don't have the same excuses/reasons/foresight that we do so it can get really muddy when it comes to roleplaying as a character who has no information when the player has information. I'd like to see this addressed somehow. Maybe you get a visit from a goddess who gives you some mission or something but forbids you to tell anyone? Or maybe you get occasional scenes where your mind is wiped and there's this meta-story about what's going on behind the scenes and that leads to the climax of the story? Maybe the MC is in on it because they're a government agent? All of this would only need to show up once every handful of runs or perhaps anytime you make progress but it'd be neat to understand the premise of the game a bit more.
* I stand by my previous comment about BE and how this is an erotic game and people come here to jerk off...BUT the idea of small details from the past having a large impact today like we're Ashton Kutcher in the butterfly effect, is a cool one! It would be cool if we could alter all sorts of events but this game is focussed on corruption and I understand that really just means characters with increasingly flexible sexual appetites but it would be cool to see other changes. Like if Jenny never got so interested in books then maybe she wouldn't be as close with Lina. Or if Sammy had a different upbringing then maybe she wouldn't be so adamant about working out? Or maybe she'd be even more fanatical about it?
* Regardless, I'd like to see a little more than one line introducing the changes. For instance right now when you increase a character's corruption there's one line saying something along the lines of "And we were always this close and open with one another" but I think it'd be cool to see maybe a couple snapshots of you two in the past and then as the corruption increases, those snapshots from the past change. EG: At first there's a picture MC is standing beside Alex politely as the caption says "Me and my friend MC" at high school graduation. Then in a corrupted photo there's Alex sexually posing herself on the MC and it's titled, "BFF MC! Gonna miss you!" I recognise this seems like a lot of work :/
I'm a big fan of any of the breast expansion content in this game. So if I was able to put in another choice in this game it'd discuss growing boobs.
* Maybe you could ask Cassidy about the breast expansion hypnosis you're about to do and get her opinion on it.
* I would love it if Jenny had more to say about her BE once you put her under. Right now if she's not tranced enough she says "I wouldn't want that" but you can't ask why. And if she is tranced enough she just nods. Would be interesting to get her subconcious opinion on things.
* There's a lot of moments you could ask Alex how she feels about her size in relation to the others. Breast envy isn't really a kink of mine but I know it's a thing. Perhaps her answer can change from "I don't mind" at low corruption/love/horny to "I really want to be bigger than her"
* I think it could be interesting to discuss Alex's BE fetish (after discovering it ofc) with Lin or Carla. Lin has her scene where she's 'guiding' the MC to progress with the girls and it'd fit in there. Carla has that scene where she asks if everything is alright and the MC could respond that he knows about her fetish.
For those looking for the BE content, here's a little guide:
- As of writing, there's three BE scenes and a handful of scenes where BE is discussed.
- Talk of big boobs is all over the game but the scenes where it's really mentioned all involve Alex. Progress her corruption levels and you'll undoubtedly find two of them, then just be sure to take her on a 'porn date' to find the last one.
- All of the BE scenes are tied to Haily's 2nd corruption level. Here she'll enlist you as a sort of confidante and ask you to give her the goss on everyone at camp. Proceed through the game until you get to her second level and on the Saturday night, you can ask her for a spy tool. The two relevant ones are the Premium Milk and the Pocket Watch
- Take the milk and give it to Alex. If she drinks it then on the following morning you'll get one of two BE scenes and it's subsequent text.
- To get the other milk BE scene you also need to give Alex a 'breast expansion massage' which you do on Saturday afternoon right before talking to Haily to get the milk. This is one of the aforementioned BE discussion scenes but it changes the ending if combined with the milk.
- The last BE scene actually involves Jenny and the pocket watch. Anytime Jenny and Lina are by the tree, and you have the watch you can attempt to hypnotise her. How this system works is that you'll deliver a number of hypnotising lines to Jenny and depending on what dialogue you chose, her trance will get deeper and deeper. If you use all the most effective lines, and get some training, you can achieve the maximum trance level needed to convince Jenny to grow her boobs (don't ask why that's something her subconscious is in control of). If you do, after that run you'll get a text.
I wanted to say that I liked the game. It's nice for one of these erotic BE games to actually be, you know, a *game*. There's challenge in navigating the events and trying to get the requirements for particular scenarios and I'd often find myself poring over the timeline trying to figure out the correct sequence, or picking out where to explore next. Which was great.
Now onto the negative.
- The timeline should be visible from the end game screen and/or main menu. I can see even in your screenshots here in the comments that even you have had to start a new run, just to view the timeline... It's very annoying to want to see the timeline, so you start a new game, only to put the puzzle pieces together and realise you need to change someone's corruption levels... which means going through the entire run unless you use the debug END RUN button.
- Why are the girls so big man? I'm not the first to comment on this but every woman in this game has larger tits than I've ever seen on anyone in person. You could halve Alex's boobs and she'd still be very big by any realistic standards. I'm guessing that the answer is simply that you like big boobs and you cannot lie; and since this is your game, you're the boss. But if I were a part of your dev team I'd be barracking for more realistic sizes, while keeping the same relative size between each character. Food for thought.
As for suggestions:
- I loved any moment where I needed to backtrack on corruption. For instance you need to have Haily at level 0 in order to be taking photos. This meant that slamming go on each corruption level as you got it wasn't always the correct answer. I'd love to see more of that where perhaps some progression might require Level 1 of one girl and Level 2 of another while she's at level 0 and another is at level 3, for example.
- I understand the character of Lina and that she's extreme levels of introverted and thus doesn't talk, but it's really hard to connect with her like that. For instance after snooping on Alex in the bedroom, the main character has to literally guess why she's upset. Thankfully, we're only presented with three options but in reality there are a million ways to interpret her body language... I really hope that at higher corruption levels she will speak, even if it's only via text messages at first.
- Since we only ever get to experience one weekend, I was hoping that some of the text message rewards would help expand that. But each picture seems to come along with the barest of story and explanation.
- Lastly, I hope to see more fetish content included. Right now the BE stuff is pretty limited and besides that this is mostly just a dating sim right? I just feel that there's a lot of other games to play if that's all you wanted so I hope there's real transformation as the game progresses in the future. Maybe it doesn't need to be BE. Perhaps you could involve ass, height or weight gain. Perhaps the transformations could be less literal and maybe you would see people arrive at the cabin with even bigger changes to their history, like if somehow you've changed history to make it so that one of these women was a girlfriend of yours all along?
Really good stuff but there's a lot of potential here. I hope you can harness it all.